Happy to Unhappy.

Bula-vinaka, Kia orana and greetings to you all. This is a Piece of writing I have been working on throughout the week.

Once there lived a little boy named Austin. He lived with his Mother and Father. Austin was the only child in his family. They were very rich, there lived in a very small city. This city was located on one of the most famous city high beachers.

Later in the year, Austin heared that he was gonna have a little baby brother. Austin was so happy, he couldn't stop jumping up and down. Then his mother hear a crack in Austin’s leg.”OH NO” mum suggested.

Austin fell to the ground and cried, mum ran to Austin and gave him some help. Mum dialed 911.The ambulance arrived. Austin was still crying. Both of the nurse helped Austin into the ambulance. Off there went to Harry Eden Hospital.

BAD WEATHER TO CAMP!

Bula Vinaka,Kia Orana and greetings to you all. This is my narrative writing about “BAD WEATHER TO CAMP”  

”So... are we still going suggested Noah”Yepp by the looks of It we are, his mum Alice said. Austin do you two have your gear ready I’ll need them right now so I can load it into the car, umm just give us a minute. “Ok said mum”

Let’s go now time is running out we will need to reach our destination in 1 hour. Ok we are rushing out now. “Oh no we have a problem, said mum”. What what mum what’s the problem. It’s RAINING really heavily suggested mum.

Mum turn off the car and said to the two boys we will need to postpone this came because of the weather. Noooooo I was looking forward to camp, Noah said. Well next week we will go said Austin. “OK it alright said Noah”.

So there went Inside and spent their morning drinking hot chocolate rather than driving in the ugly weather.  "Yummy said Austin".

Burning Hot day.

On a hot sunny afternoon, sue and her sister Letitia was sitting on their home pouch in the hot sun. Sue and Laetitia decided to go down to eastern bay beach for a swim. Let’s go and have a good afternoon swim, "said Sue.

When their arrived, Laetitia and Sue forgot their togs. “Oops we have a problem said Laetitia” “What is it said Sue” We forgot our togs at home. We will need to ring mum and ask if she can drop off our togs and towel. “Ok suggested Sue” let’s get on and ring mum. So they rang mum.

At home mum’s phone rang, Hello Mary's speaking. Hey mum it me Sue, um can you please drop off  my togs and Laetitia’s please we forgot about it, it’s in my room on my bed. “Ok said mum I’m on my way”. “Ok bye mum said Sue”. Off mum went to drop off their togs.

As soon as mum gave their tog, Off their both went into the water. “Ahh that’s so much better, Letitia said” So their both had a great nice swim.

Guy Fawkes Night.

One late night, Joey and her friend christina was watching Mentalist well Joey’s mum went out to buy some guy fawkes for them. All their could hear was... “BOOM BOOM POW” goes the fireworks. Their both ran out and watched.

As their were watching Joey’s mother came home. “Yipee” Joey and Christina was YELLING.... “we got our fireworks” Nana. Joey’s mum went inside to get the lighter.

“Oh no mum said” girls we have a problem “What mum what Joey suggested” I forgot where I put the lighter. Mum can’t you just go to countdown and buy one. “Yeah I can but you two girls need to behave yourself well I’m gonne to countdown. I’ll be right back. Ok they're both said.

Off went mum. Later when mum came back from countdown she yelled out JOEY,CHRISTINA i’m back so Joey and Christina run down stair’s went outside. Mum gave them the lighter, well mum went inside to have a cup of coffee.

Silly Sheep's.

One hot sizzling summer’s day, there was a little boy named Cheeky sheep.  Its had one was a cheeky sheep and had one other brother named Clumsy sheep.  They were both exploring the outdoors but one day they find themselves in double trouble.

The Higher Hills was a dangerous place to be there were goblins, dragons and thats where they went.  One goblin stopped them in their tracks and said “I sure do love sheeps” they ran as fast as they could wasting no time, Clumsy falling in a ditch and Cheeky climbing the rocks not reminding Clumsy was even where.

Clumsy cried for help ”HELP ME PLEASE”.  Cheeky glanced back at him and in the corner of his eye he saw a huge goblin with his tongue hanging on the side of his mouth.  Cheeky give Clumsy his hand saying “Grab my hand”.  And in no time they find each other landing face first into a stone hard road.


Created by Cael and David.

Upcoming Term.

As I walk through the school gates I was very please to see all my friends. We walk though the breeze I saw a sign. What does it say. I couldn't tell because it was in different letters. Ohhh, I said to myself it’s spells Toy Story.

I had a topic in my mind that I thought we would be learning about and guess what the topic I had in my mind? Healthy food. The reason why I thought we would be learning about healthy food was because, last term nearly everyone bring to school junk. That was the reason.

This term, I am looking forward to make toys or even try flying a kite that Mr. Barks has brought in. I can’t wait till everything.

Youth In Sylvia Park. NO.2

What is Youth? Well youth is a program that can be a wonderful way to join younger children and even teenagers to meet and become one family. Some churches has small groups that may meet on a daily week or maybe even in the weekends, but it up to them.  As I go on, I will be talking to you  about my wonderful day at youth in Sylvia Park.

Youth was so much fun last week Friday. You might be asking, Where was your youth. Well my church youth was held in sylvia park in one of the most famous store... Jay Jays.
I really love going to Jay Jays, do you?

Well in the meantime, we were invited to go in Jay Jays to play a little game, called finders  keepers losers weepers, which means if we find one or more skeins or jumpers maybe a top we get to keep it. It was so much fun. I wish all of my friends were there to find some of their favourite clothes.

I had a great Friday last week. I wish we could do it again sometime this term. I hoped you enjoy what you have finish reading. Keep on visiting my blog for more interesting writing.
I would love to say a big thanks to Jay Jays for inviting us into your famous store. And another big huge thanks to our church for making this fun for us.

Youth In Sylvia Park.

What is Youth? Well youth is a program that can be a wonderful way to join younger children and even teenagers to meet and become one family. Some churches have small groups that may meet on a daily week or maybe even in the weekends, but it up to them.  As I go on, I will be talking to you  about my wonderful day at youth.

Youth was so much fun last week Friday. You might be asking, Where was your youth. Well my church youth was held in sylvia park in one of the most famous store... Jay Jays.
I really love going to Jay Jays, do you?

Well in the meantime, we were invited to go in Jay Jays to play a little game, called finders  keepers losers weepers, which means if we find one or more skeins or jumpers we get to keep it. It was so much fun. I wish all of my friends were there to find some of their favourite clothes.

I had a great Friday last week. I wish we could do it again sometime this term. I hoped you enjoy what you have finish reading. Keep on visiting my blog for more interesting writing.

Disappointing Volleyball Trials No.2.

This week, as part of my writing, I am going to write about Disappointing Volleyball Trials. “You might be asking” Why does your title start with disappointing .
Well this is why, I tried out for our school boys volleyball team. And guess what..... The story goes on.

Last week, Mr.Barks held volleyball trials for anyone who wanted to play for the school in a tournament. Our trials was held in the school hall with our school sport co-ordinator Mrs Va’afusuaga. It was really fun and not only that funny.

As soon as, I got on the court I was happy. The ball came over to me, I toss it up and let other players hit the ball over the net. “YEAH” I said, with a big happy  face. We got a goal.... That was the last play, so we could hear if we made it or not. I couldn't wait to hear if I made the team the next day. I woke up and got ready for school. I straight away went and had a look on the sport board. I didn’t make it, I was so upset and not only that I was about to cry.

Tuesdays and Thursday  lunchtime is volleyball practice for those who made the team. I wanted to go but I didn’t make the team. I really enjoy playing volleyball.
Thanks to Cael for proof reading my writing.

Disappointing Volleyball Trials.

This week, as part of my writing, I am going to write about Disappointing Volleyball Trials. “You might be asking” Why does your title start with disappointing .
Well this is why, I tried out for our school volleyball team. And guess what..... The story goes on.

Last week, My teacher Mr.Barks held volleyball trials for anyone who wanted to play for the school in a tournament. Our trials was held in the school hall with our school sport co-ordinator and Mr. Barks. It was really fun and not only that funny.

As soon as, I got on the court I was happy. The ball came over to me, I toss it up and let other players hit the ball over the net. “YEAH” I said, with a big happy  face. We got a goal.... That was the last play, so we could hear if we made it or not. I couldn't wait to hear if I made the team. Mr.Barks called out the names that made it, but I didn’t hear my name. I was so so upset.
The next day, I came to school, and went and had another look on the team list. I still didn’t see my name. I was about to cry.

Tuesdays and Thursday  lunchtime is volleyball practice for those who made the team. I wanted to go but I didn’t make the team. I really enjoy playing volleyball.
Thanks to Cael for proof reading my writing.

Valentines No.2

This week, as part of my writing, I am going to write about Fathers Day. As you will know that, my title is about Valentines. You might be asking, “Why does Fathers Day make me put Valentines as my title. Well the reason why I did Valentines as my title, was because for Fathers Day, my family and I went out for dinner and This is how it all played out.

Waking up, early in the morning, rushing to my dad saying “HAPPY FATHERS DAY DAD! He said back with a lost voice “Thank you son” So I said, “Tonight is the night dad. I said, “Ok”. So we waited until it was 7.00pm at night. “Yay” I said to myself, “It’s 7 now can we go now please mum”.Ok lets go now Mum said, Is everyone ready. Yes we all yelled back. And off we went to where all of our little friends were. I mean the food.


As we arrived, my tummy started to rumble. “Mmmm” I said to myself, I hope my BIG FRIENDS are inside.
So I walked up the ramp and opened the door. Off I went inside. There it was... Butter Chicken, Hot chips, Beef and rice. I walked over to where the plate and spoons were and got one of each. So then I walked over to where my big yummy friends were, I scooped and scooped out my favourites. Then I zig zagged across the room till I got to my table. “You my dear”, I said, “Are you ready to go into my mouth?”, “Well you are”. I said. Took my spoon and stuck it into my Beef and rice, then into my mouth. “YUMMYYYY”

My tummy was very fool and I was tired at the sametime. I wanted to go home, but we had one more thing to do, which was to go to the movies. “Lets go now!” My mum said. “Are we going home now?” I said. Now we are going to the movies. I said, “Can you drop me off to aunt's house please?”. No, we all have to go, so then I said “ok”.

After all of that, we finally got home. I jumped into bed and fell asleep. The next day I woke up, went into the lounge and sat down. Mum came out and said don’t you have school. I said “Yea, but I don’t wanna go,” “Well you have to get in the shower now.” I walked to the bath and hopped in and washed myself. I came out and put on my uniform. I grabbed my lunch and walked out the door. “Good bye mum” I said.


A big thanks to Ramona for proof reading my writing, making sure it makes sense. Thank you so so much.
This is my re-edited piece of writing, which was posted this week on Wednesday. There will be some changes in this new edited writing.

Valentines...

This week, as part of my writing I am going to write about Fathers Day. As you know, My title is about Valentines. “You might be asking” what does Fathers Day makes you put Valentines as your title. Well the reason why, was because for Fathers Day we went out for dinner. Will this is how it all played out.

Waking up, early in the morning, rushing to my dad saying HAPPY FATHERS DAY! “He said back with a lost voice thank you son” So I said, tonight is the night dad. ‘He said ok. So I waited until it was getting dark. “Yay” I said to myself, it’s dark now.  Get ready dad we are going. “Dad said back where” so I told him where we were going. So he got dress and off we went to where all of our little friends were.

As we arrived, my tummy started to rumble. “Mmmm” I said to myself, I hope my BIG FRIEND is in side.
So I walked up the ramp and opened the door. Off I went inside. And there it was Butter Chicken, Hot chips and Beef and rice. Walked over to where the Plate and spoons were and got one of each. So then I walked over to where my big yummy friends were, I cupped and cupped my favourites. So then I zig zagged across the room till I got to my table. You dear, I said, are you ready to go into my mouth, Well you are. Took my spoon and stuck it into my Beef and rice then into my mouth. “YUMMYYYY”


My tummy was very fool and I was tired at the sametime. I wanted to go home, but we had one more thing to do, which was to go to the movies. “Lets go now my mum said”. Are we going home now “I said” No we are going to the movies. I said can you drop me off to aunt's house please. No we all have to go so I said ok.



After all of that, we finally got home. I jumped into bed and fell asleep. The next day I woke up, Went in to the lounge and sat down. Mum came out and said don’t you have school. I said yea but I don’t wanna go, well you have to now get in the shower. I walked to the bath and hop in and washed myself. I came out and stuck on my uniform, Grabbed my lunch and walk out the door. Good bye mum I said.

Thanks to Ramona for all of her help.

Paralympics 2012.

This term, As part of our topic, We have been learning about the London Olympics. Well but in this story that I’m about to tell you, is similar to it but it is about paralympics.

“You might be asking what is paralympics” Well Paralympics is just like Olympics. But paralympics is for people that has something on their body that there have lost, ever since they were born.

paralympics is played in London this year so is Olympics. paralympics was brought to you by many people from all around the world who gave up they time to make this work. As my story goes on they will be something BIZARRE that you might hear of.


My feelings about the paralympics is really alright but at the sametime I can’t believe in something BIZARRE. The BIZARRE thing I can’t believe is wheelchair rugby. “WHEELCHAIR RUGBY” I said to myself, How in the world can they play that kind of sports. Well I have no idea how they can tackle in a wheelchair. Thanks to Jasmine for proof reading my hard work.

Intriguing Ceremony...

The London 2012 closing ceremony started at 9pm 12 August. If you didn’t know, that the London Olympics has finished, well here is all the news for you.

“You might be asking”? How come they had an closing ceremony. Well here is the story. The reason why there had an closing ceremony was to celebrate those who took part in each and one of the events.

As there were celebrating, Over 80,00000 people were watching at London even around the world “OMG” I said to myself.Well I thought that this will be a good idea to write about this since there will be another one for paralympics.Wish them good luck.

Well let’s get back to the closing ceremony. As they were celebrating, Fireworks were going everywhere but not just that.....flags representing our country’s.

My likes about the Olympics was everything. But the most outstanding events was shot put. Enjoying Valerie Adams play against others. I was also Disappointed how Adams didn’t get the “GOLD MEDAL” Then the news came Adams was very happy to hear what she got. Guess what she got? Her GOLD MEDAL. She was very happy.

Best Friends Forever.

“Who is my Best Friend”? Well in my second to last post, I have wrote about this special person called Cael. As I go on, this piece of writing is all about Cael and I. This is how it laid out becoming best friends.

Well Cael and I, Meet last year, which was very not that long. She has only been here for four years, and I have been here for twelve years.“WOW” I said to myself, because I have been at this school for long....

Well, In our spare time, Cael and I loves to SING.... Singing, Is what Cael and I loves to do everyday. Everyday you will always hear me or Cael singing. But on the other hand, I love to sing the most.


This year, Cael and I have join Pt England Performing arts. In performing arts, we have chosen to sing, So every tuesday we will have parasites at lunch. I am glad to call you my best friend forever.Now it is getting to that end again, of closing off. I hoped you haven’t forgotten who is my Best friend in the “WORLD”

Super Best Friend...

Cael:)

Your laughter makes me smile
Your skipping makes me laugh
But the best thing about you is.....

You're sweet just like strawberry
You’re cool like a watermelon
cuddly like a teddy bear
beautiful like a butterfly
in the sky
Shiny like a star
Bright as the moon
But most of all..... You’re like
the “BEST FRIEND IN THE WORLD”....

Fabulous Friends.....

Making new friends....”was a big thing for me this year”. As a go on, I will be talking to you  about me and my new friends. I have a lot of friends this year so this might be a big piece of writing.

Hey, My name is David, but my friends call me little boo. The reason why my friends call me little boo, because I am short, and I am also there boo. That’s why I am call their little boo.
I also love to hang out with them on our break time. But in class I sometimes do my work, or I talk to the person right next to me.

“Would you love to meet my friends? Well if you do, just read on if you don’t just still read on. This is my first friend I meet ever since she  started this school..... Brooke is her name. She has be my friend for five and a half years. Brooke is so kind and helpful to others. THAT’S LONG RIGHT”. Well it still goes on. My next friend I meet was Cael. Cael and I, meet last year which was not that long, like Brooke. Cael, has be up there for me whenever I am in trouble. She is never like that, to my other friends. Last year, This new girl named Ngametua, That I didn’t know looked familiar to this person I knew. But guess what.... I was “RIGHT” she is the person that looked like someone that I knew. Ngametua is a great friend to me, and helpful to others just like Cael. This year, I meet another friend, her name is Ramona. Ramona cares of others and also loves to talk.

In our spare time, We all love to play together and also love to sing when we walk around. But there is one thing we all love to do is “TALK”. Talking is our main thing we do. That why I love my friends.
In class, We are all on task, That’s if we don’t sit next to each other. But TBH, if you don’t know what TBH means, it is To Be Honest. Well TBH I really don’t like to sit next to my friends when I do my work, Because I talk to them and get distracted from others.

Our favourite subjects in school is, Maths, Sports, Reading and also singing. Those are all of our favourite subjects. But the main subjects we love is Maths and singing.

Now it is coming to that end again of finishing my writing, A big huge thanks to my friends that has been there for me. I love being with my friends. And sorry if I didn’t tell you earlier, we are all in the same class. Here is a little poem for my friends.

I’ll always be beside you
until the very end
wiping all your tears away
being your best friend
I’ll smile when you smile
and feel all the pain you do
and if you cry a single tear
I’ll promise I’ll cry too.
 

Beep Test...

“Oh no the Beep test! I said to myself, looking at Mr Barks with a unhappy face. Me having “BUTTERFLIES” didn’t like it, I really didn’t want to do it, but that’s how life goes.. Here is how it all laid out.

Getting ready..... still with my butterflies attached to my tummy, I was upset because the beep test to me is running a lot up and down. But “GUESS WHAT” I was right when we started, it was up and down our school courts. “Gosh” I was getting very and very and very TIRED.

I was getting very tired so I dropped out. “You might be asking why? Well this is what happen, I was running, running and running at the same time didn’t want to give up but I had to. “NO” I said to myself, DON'T give up, because CHAMPIONS NEVER  EVER GIVEs UP.

Dropping out, was a huge thing for me. Waiting and waiting for the last person. Wanting to know what was my score. Finally it was getting to the end of known my score I was happy. As the last person drop out, I was waiting to hear what I got. My name was called out, I was excited to hear, David your score was level 3.1 seconds..... I was a bit happy, but at the same time upset .

Next time, I would love to do the Beep test again. But I think I can score a higher score than the score, I scored. Thanks to Miss Vaafusuaga, for inviting us to do this event.

Basket ball trails.

This term, as part of our topic, I have signed up for one of the Olympic sport but here at pt england. One of the olympic sport I have sign up was for Basketball. Basketball has given me an opportunity to play for our school in a tournament.

Last week, Friday was an opportunity for us boys and girls to go to Tamaki College rec-center. Tamaki has given us to use they own rec-center for our own basketball teams. We have been given a time to go down which was after our break. Off we went as a team down to Tamaki rec-center.

As we arrived, we were taken by one of our teachers that followed us into the rec. As we got in, we saw other schools from around our area trialling out for the basketball team, but we didn’t mind. So we got on with our trails, I was abit too shy because i’m not that kind of person that like to play sports, I the kind of person that likes to do dramer.

On the way back to school, I was so happy because I thought I was gonna be slag but I wasn’t. As I enter the school gates one of my friends asked me if I made the team, “I said back to them” No we haven’t got the the updates. So I said to myself I hope I make the team.

At last it got down to 12 gentlemens, I was one of them. Today was our fourth trial it went very well but it started to poor, but we were so lucky because... we were in the SCHOOL HALL.

Volleyball Olympics sport.

I have recently chosen to write about volleyball as a olympic sport. I am not familiar with this but I know it is a significant event.

Volleyball is a team sport, which two teams of six players separated by a net. Each teams tries to score points by hitting over the volleyball ball over the net, if the ball goes over the net that's a point to that team. Volleyball has been a part of the program of the summer olympics games. This year volleyball will be played in London for the first time.

This year volleyball will be played in London for the first time. “ONLY” two more days away from the Olympics, in London. I really wish I went and saw the olympics in london, “wouldn't you”? I would love to go and have a good look.

I would love to play volleyball once, but I need to practice more so i can be very good.
If I was asked to compete in the olympics 2012 in london this year, I would need to prove that I can do it. But if I was asked to play in a volleyball ball team, I would, but again I have to do the same thing.

This is the very end of my writing for this week. I hope you enjoyed it.
Thanks to Ramona for helping me with my spelling check.