What is Youth? Well youth is a program that can be a wonderful way to join younger children and even teenagers to meet and become one family. Some churches has small groups that may meet on a daily week or maybe even in the weekends, but it up to them. As I go on, I will be talking to you about my wonderful day at youth in Sylvia Park.
Youth was so much fun last week Friday. You might be asking, Where was your youth. Well my church youth was held in sylvia park in one of the most famous store... Jay Jays.
I really love going to Jay Jays, do you?
Well in the meantime, we were invited to go in Jay Jays to play a little game, called finders keepers losers weepers, which means if we find one or more skeins or jumpers maybe a top we get to keep it. It was so much fun. I wish all of my friends were there to find some of their favourite clothes.
I had a great Friday last week. I wish we could do it again sometime this term. I hoped you enjoy what you have finish reading. Keep on visiting my blog for more interesting writing.
I would love to say a big thanks to Jay Jays for inviting us into your famous store. And another big huge thanks to our church for making this fun for us.
Friday, September 21, 2012
Wednesday, September 19, 2012
Youth In Sylvia Park.
What is Youth? Well youth is a program that can be a wonderful way to join younger children and even teenagers to meet and become one family. Some churches have small groups that may meet on a daily week or maybe even in the weekends, but it up to them. As I go on, I will be talking to you about my wonderful day at youth.
Youth was so much fun last week Friday. You might be asking, Where was your youth. Well my church youth was held in sylvia park in one of the most famous store... Jay Jays.
I really love going to Jay Jays, do you?
Well in the meantime, we were invited to go in Jay Jays to play a little game, called finders keepers losers weepers, which means if we find one or more skeins or jumpers we get to keep it. It was so much fun. I wish all of my friends were there to find some of their favourite clothes.
I had a great Friday last week. I wish we could do it again sometime this term. I hoped you enjoy what you have finish reading. Keep on visiting my blog for more interesting writing.
Friday, September 14, 2012
Disappointing Volleyball Trials No.2.
This week, as part of my writing, I am going to write about Disappointing Volleyball Trials. “You might be asking” Why does your title start with disappointing .
Well this is why, I tried out for our school boys volleyball team. And guess what..... The story goes on.
Last week, Mr.Barks held volleyball trials for anyone who wanted to play for the school in a tournament. Our trials was held in the school hall with our school sport co-ordinator Mrs Va’afusuaga. It was really fun and not only that funny.
As soon as, I got on the court I was happy. The ball came over to me, I toss it up and let other players hit the ball over the net. “YEAH” I said, with a big happy face. We got a goal.... That was the last play, so we could hear if we made it or not. I couldn't wait to hear if I made the team the next day. I woke up and got ready for school. I straight away went and had a look on the sport board. I didn’t make it, I was so upset and not only that I was about to cry.
Tuesdays and Thursday lunchtime is volleyball practice for those who made the team. I wanted to go but I didn’t make the team. I really enjoy playing volleyball.
Thanks to Cael for proof reading my writing.
Well this is why, I tried out for our school boys volleyball team. And guess what..... The story goes on.
Last week, Mr.Barks held volleyball trials for anyone who wanted to play for the school in a tournament. Our trials was held in the school hall with our school sport co-ordinator Mrs Va’afusuaga. It was really fun and not only that funny.
As soon as, I got on the court I was happy. The ball came over to me, I toss it up and let other players hit the ball over the net. “YEAH” I said, with a big happy face. We got a goal.... That was the last play, so we could hear if we made it or not. I couldn't wait to hear if I made the team the next day. I woke up and got ready for school. I straight away went and had a look on the sport board. I didn’t make it, I was so upset and not only that I was about to cry.
Tuesdays and Thursday lunchtime is volleyball practice for those who made the team. I wanted to go but I didn’t make the team. I really enjoy playing volleyball.
Thanks to Cael for proof reading my writing.
Wednesday, September 12, 2012
Disappointing Volleyball Trials.
This week, as part of my writing, I am going to write about Disappointing Volleyball Trials. “You might be asking” Why does your title start with disappointing .
Well this is why, I tried out for our school volleyball team. And guess what..... The story goes on.
Last week, My teacher Mr.Barks held volleyball trials for anyone who wanted to play for the school in a tournament. Our trials was held in the school hall with our school sport co-ordinator and Mr. Barks. It was really fun and not only that funny.
As soon as, I got on the court I was happy. The ball came over to me, I toss it up and let other players hit the ball over the net. “YEAH” I said, with a big happy face. We got a goal.... That was the last play, so we could hear if we made it or not. I couldn't wait to hear if I made the team. Mr.Barks called out the names that made it, but I didn’t hear my name. I was so so upset.
The next day, I came to school, and went and had another look on the team list. I still didn’t see my name. I was about to cry.
Tuesdays and Thursday lunchtime is volleyball practice for those who made the team. I wanted to go but I didn’t make the team. I really enjoy playing volleyball.
Thanks to Cael for proof reading my writing.
Well this is why, I tried out for our school volleyball team. And guess what..... The story goes on.
Last week, My teacher Mr.Barks held volleyball trials for anyone who wanted to play for the school in a tournament. Our trials was held in the school hall with our school sport co-ordinator and Mr. Barks. It was really fun and not only that funny.
As soon as, I got on the court I was happy. The ball came over to me, I toss it up and let other players hit the ball over the net. “YEAH” I said, with a big happy face. We got a goal.... That was the last play, so we could hear if we made it or not. I couldn't wait to hear if I made the team. Mr.Barks called out the names that made it, but I didn’t hear my name. I was so so upset.
The next day, I came to school, and went and had another look on the team list. I still didn’t see my name. I was about to cry.
Tuesdays and Thursday lunchtime is volleyball practice for those who made the team. I wanted to go but I didn’t make the team. I really enjoy playing volleyball.
Thanks to Cael for proof reading my writing.
Friday, September 7, 2012
Valentines No.2
This week, as part of my writing, I am going to write about Fathers Day. As you will know that, my title is about Valentines. You might be asking, “Why does Fathers Day make me put Valentines as my title. Well the reason why I did Valentines as my title, was because for Fathers Day, my family and I went out for dinner and This is how it all played out.
Waking up, early in the morning, rushing to my dad saying “HAPPY FATHERS DAY DAD! He said back with a lost voice “Thank you son” So I said, “Tonight is the night dad. I said, “Ok”. So we waited until it was 7.00pm at night. “Yay” I said to myself, “It’s 7 now can we go now please mum”.Ok lets go now Mum said, Is everyone ready. Yes we all yelled back. And off we went to where all of our little friends were. I mean the food.
As we arrived, my tummy started to rumble. “Mmmm” I said to myself, I hope my BIG FRIENDS are inside.
So I walked up the ramp and opened the door. Off I went inside. There it was... Butter Chicken, Hot chips, Beef and rice. I walked over to where the plate and spoons were and got one of each. So then I walked over to where my big yummy friends were, I scooped and scooped out my favourites. Then I zig zagged across the room till I got to my table. “You my dear”, I said, “Are you ready to go into my mouth?”, “Well you are”. I said. Took my spoon and stuck it into my Beef and rice, then into my mouth. “YUMMYYYY”
My tummy was very fool and I was tired at the sametime. I wanted to go home, but we had one more thing to do, which was to go to the movies. “Lets go now!” My mum said. “Are we going home now?” I said. Now we are going to the movies. I said, “Can you drop me off to aunt's house please?”. No, we all have to go, so then I said “ok”.
After all of that, we finally got home. I jumped into bed and fell asleep. The next day I woke up, went into the lounge and sat down. Mum came out and said don’t you have school. I said “Yea, but I don’t wanna go,” “Well you have to get in the shower now.” I walked to the bath and hopped in and washed myself. I came out and put on my uniform. I grabbed my lunch and walked out the door. “Good bye mum” I said.
A big thanks to Ramona for proof reading my writing, making sure it makes sense. Thank you so so much.
This is my re-edited piece of writing, which was posted this week on Wednesday. There will be some changes in this new edited writing.
Waking up, early in the morning, rushing to my dad saying “HAPPY FATHERS DAY DAD! He said back with a lost voice “Thank you son” So I said, “Tonight is the night dad. I said, “Ok”. So we waited until it was 7.00pm at night. “Yay” I said to myself, “It’s 7 now can we go now please mum”.Ok lets go now Mum said, Is everyone ready. Yes we all yelled back. And off we went to where all of our little friends were. I mean the food.
As we arrived, my tummy started to rumble. “Mmmm” I said to myself, I hope my BIG FRIENDS are inside.
So I walked up the ramp and opened the door. Off I went inside. There it was... Butter Chicken, Hot chips, Beef and rice. I walked over to where the plate and spoons were and got one of each. So then I walked over to where my big yummy friends were, I scooped and scooped out my favourites. Then I zig zagged across the room till I got to my table. “You my dear”, I said, “Are you ready to go into my mouth?”, “Well you are”. I said. Took my spoon and stuck it into my Beef and rice, then into my mouth. “YUMMYYYY”
My tummy was very fool and I was tired at the sametime. I wanted to go home, but we had one more thing to do, which was to go to the movies. “Lets go now!” My mum said. “Are we going home now?” I said. Now we are going to the movies. I said, “Can you drop me off to aunt's house please?”. No, we all have to go, so then I said “ok”.
After all of that, we finally got home. I jumped into bed and fell asleep. The next day I woke up, went into the lounge and sat down. Mum came out and said don’t you have school. I said “Yea, but I don’t wanna go,” “Well you have to get in the shower now.” I walked to the bath and hopped in and washed myself. I came out and put on my uniform. I grabbed my lunch and walked out the door. “Good bye mum” I said.
A big thanks to Ramona for proof reading my writing, making sure it makes sense. Thank you so so much.
This is my re-edited piece of writing, which was posted this week on Wednesday. There will be some changes in this new edited writing.
Wednesday, September 5, 2012
Valentines...
This week, as part of my writing I am going to write about Fathers Day. As you know, My title is about Valentines. “You might be asking” what does Fathers Day makes you put Valentines as your title. Well the reason why, was because for Fathers Day we went out for dinner. Will this is how it all played out.
Waking up, early in the morning, rushing to my dad saying HAPPY FATHERS DAY! “He said back with a lost voice thank you son” So I said, tonight is the night dad. ‘He said ok. So I waited until it was getting dark. “Yay” I said to myself, it’s dark now. Get ready dad we are going. “Dad said back where” so I told him where we were going. So he got dress and off we went to where all of our little friends were.
As we arrived, my tummy started to rumble. “Mmmm” I said to myself, I hope my BIG FRIEND is in side.
So I walked up the ramp and opened the door. Off I went inside. And there it was Butter Chicken, Hot chips and Beef and rice. Walked over to where the Plate and spoons were and got one of each. So then I walked over to where my big yummy friends were, I cupped and cupped my favourites. So then I zig zagged across the room till I got to my table. You dear, I said, are you ready to go into my mouth, Well you are. Took my spoon and stuck it into my Beef and rice then into my mouth. “YUMMYYYY”
My tummy was very fool and I was tired at the sametime. I wanted to go home, but we had one more thing to do, which was to go to the movies. “Lets go now my mum said”. Are we going home now “I said” No we are going to the movies. I said can you drop me off to aunt's house please. No we all have to go so I said ok.
After all of that, we finally got home. I jumped into bed and fell asleep. The next day I woke up, Went in to the lounge and sat down. Mum came out and said don’t you have school. I said yea but I don’t wanna go, well you have to now get in the shower. I walked to the bath and hop in and washed myself. I came out and stuck on my uniform, Grabbed my lunch and walk out the door. Good bye mum I said.
Thanks to Ramona for all of her help.
Waking up, early in the morning, rushing to my dad saying HAPPY FATHERS DAY! “He said back with a lost voice thank you son” So I said, tonight is the night dad. ‘He said ok. So I waited until it was getting dark. “Yay” I said to myself, it’s dark now. Get ready dad we are going. “Dad said back where” so I told him where we were going. So he got dress and off we went to where all of our little friends were.
As we arrived, my tummy started to rumble. “Mmmm” I said to myself, I hope my BIG FRIEND is in side.
So I walked up the ramp and opened the door. Off I went inside. And there it was Butter Chicken, Hot chips and Beef and rice. Walked over to where the Plate and spoons were and got one of each. So then I walked over to where my big yummy friends were, I cupped and cupped my favourites. So then I zig zagged across the room till I got to my table. You dear, I said, are you ready to go into my mouth, Well you are. Took my spoon and stuck it into my Beef and rice then into my mouth. “YUMMYYYY”
My tummy was very fool and I was tired at the sametime. I wanted to go home, but we had one more thing to do, which was to go to the movies. “Lets go now my mum said”. Are we going home now “I said” No we are going to the movies. I said can you drop me off to aunt's house please. No we all have to go so I said ok.
After all of that, we finally got home. I jumped into bed and fell asleep. The next day I woke up, Went in to the lounge and sat down. Mum came out and said don’t you have school. I said yea but I don’t wanna go, well you have to now get in the shower. I walked to the bath and hop in and washed myself. I came out and stuck on my uniform, Grabbed my lunch and walk out the door. Good bye mum I said.
Thanks to Ramona for all of her help.
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