←This is what Willow park looks like.
On the first week of the school holidays which was on a Monday we went to riverside camp.When we got there we were put into our groups.After that we went up stairs to look for our cabin. Our cabin number was 8 and seven people in my cabin to.
On the second week of my school we went to the pools at panmure. It was so cool My brother Frankie said. So me and my family went into the inside pools were it was nice and warm and my brother said that's more better.
My holiday was extremely cool and I had fun at camp and at the pools with my family.
Hey David
ReplyDeleteGood to hear you enjoyed yourself in the holidays :)
I would have liked to hear what you got up to at riverside camp it sounds like there would have been lots of opportunity for fun :)
Its always nice to have a nice warm pool to swim in when the outdoor ones get too cold.
It might be good for you to have a look at editing for sense when you go back and check your work.
Have fun and keep writing :)